Very Shakesperian!
thast the shit

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)

I love it are you gonna change ur avatar now?

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I "do" interesting people.
Sakura-Con commercial 09: [link]

oh hell no

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"You're not fuckin' Santa Clause, Julian, and I don't need your fuckin' cherry trees."

Fuck you Kipprusoff, ya chain-smokin ginger!

why yo?

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I "do" interesting people.
Sakura-Con commercial 09: [link]

i was going to write a poem like this... but i won't bother now. i couldn't possibly top that

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"THOSE WHO WOULD GIVE UP THE LIBERTY OF NOT FOLLOWING SONICBUTTERFLY'S RULES FOR THE SECURITY OF MEETING HER EXPECTATIONS DESERVE NEITHER!" - *JupiterWave

First I will make a few corrections:

Oer should be o’er

In the third line where there is a double all, there should be a comma after the first all or get rid of one of the alls.

Unspoke is not a word, unspoken is. Unless this is an intentional mispelling.

For a poem speaking of God I particularly liked this one, it is not often you get to hear the Christian referenced god be talked about in capacitance of such power and ability. Or perhaps it has just been awhile since I have been to church.

I like the ending:

Know the terror of His awful Being
And each the terror of thine own.

It harkens on the fact that we each of our own evils inside of us and capabilities to reign terror down on others.

Good poem, its solid.

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~RoninGaleria My comments carry honesty 98% of the time, bear this in mind.

Thanks a lot for this man, this was the first time I tried writing a poem like this that was really religious themed and I found it tough to pull off, but I do like how it came out. The typos are intentionally done to maintain rhythm, except for the double "all" which was a mistake. Good commentating!

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"You're not fuckin' Santa Clause, Julian, and I don't need your fuckin' cherry trees."

Fuck you Kipprusoff, ya chain-smokin ginger!

It feels forced, the king james has plenty of psalms that don't use the words electric of atomic, but use equally powerful words. I know well the temptation to use olde english in order to stylize my writings, and it doesn't work with words dealing with modern concepts such as atomic and electric.

and what exactly do you follow in terms of faith? Are you simply aware of god and set no religion on Him or do you subscribe to any particular set of ideas on the Almighty?

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Be God's

member of *penpushers

I figure if you put all of the religions together, you're probably a little closer to understanding God that way, but I'm not sure I have any real understanding of God. I believe, but I'm confused by what I see. Spirituality is a complicated thing.

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"You're not fuckin' Santa Clause, Julian, and I don't need your fuckin' cherry trees."

Fuck you Kipprusoff, ya chain-smokin ginger!